The story is told about a scientist who picked apart a flower. She examined the petals, the stem, the pistol and stamens, etc. She reported, “I’ve examined every part of this flower, and I cannot locate its beauty.”
Literary analysis, and indeed most types of analysis, runs the risk of picking apart the object studied while missing the character of the whole. The question I want to put forward is this: “How did Hemingway’s A Farewell to Arms make you feel?” With a writer like Hemingway, who is unquestionably capable of conveying what he wishes to the reader, what you experience when reading the book is what he wants you to experience. That is the purpose for his writing, that communication of the experience that reading his work creates. Certainly we can study how he manages to convey the experience so successfully. We can note that, when engaged in warfare, his description of the weather is that its effect is depressing and demoralizing. The rain is unending and oppressive. Apart from the war context, rain is neutral and even refreshing. We can observe his use of stichomythia to display love, camaraderie, compassion, and to break up what would otherwise be an overly dark tale that would bog the reader down in the swamps of despair. We can explore all the little elements contained in the story – the Saint Anthony medal, the discussions about if war ever ends, the espionage flavor of the early stages of Frederic and Catherine’s love relationship, to mention a very few. All of these, however, must take second place to how Hemingway makes us feel and, with that, what he wants us to reflect about.
I read this classic work many years ago, and found that, what I didn’t already remember, I recalled readily this time around. The feeling remained. That feeling is one of despair and helplessness. The characters are maneuvered, completely manipulated, and control of anything in their lives is pure illusion. If the elements aren’t brutalizing the characters, other people are. From the enemy army to the military police executing officers in one’s own, people take up where nature leaves off. Relief, comfort, sympathy, help, all come from individuals, and are dwarfed by the giant forces of nature and warfare. The love relationship against the compellingly dark backdrop seems puny, overly optimistic, childish, even silly, and certainly doomed.
For Hemingway, people are ants on a burning log. When he offers this image, about tossing an ant-infested log on a fire, he says that he could have pulled the log out of the fire, like some benevolent god, and rescued the still-living ants, but he did not. Neither does the Benevolent God rescue us. Frederic is cast as a non-believer, but he is really a cynic. He believes in a God that allows us to be beaten down by the forces of nature, and who is uninterested in saving us from our own brutal selves. His God can, but will not, rescue us from the “fire.” At the end of the tale, Frederic prays (to whom if he does not believe?) and his prayer is one of desperation, one last-ditch effort to awaken a sense of responsibility in an uncaring Deity. The escape from tragedy by escaping from the war is a cruel illusion. Tragedy reaches out to grab him anyway. There is no way off the burning log, just the occasional temporarily-cool spot.
A Farewell to Arms is a dark work. It poses powerful puzzles to ponder. Hemingway offers no help in the challenge laid down by the problem of evil in the world. The work stays with you long after you’ve turned the last page, because Hemingway can convey with force the futility of hoping to evade the funeral march which is the human condition.
Well done, Ernie! Pardon me if I don’t read your story to the children. And pass the shotgun, please – the shot glass is only a short-term fix.
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Pl 3100: ssc: This post describes vividly how this person felt about the story. I agree that it was a depressing novel, but a expression of the war.
Comment by Sarah Schwent November 7, 2007 @ 7:15 pmPL 3100- I agree with this man completely. He obviously is a genious and knows exactly what he is talking about. This book was definately dark and makes you think about how depressing war really is.
Comment by The one and only November 7, 2007 @ 7:19 pmPl: 3100
This is a very vivid description of the story. Explaining the depressing conditions of the war. The examples are specific and understandable.
Comment by Sarah Schwent November 7, 2007 @ 7:28 pmWhy do we feel the need to break every piece of art down to the smallest little piece? The opening really sums it up with “I’ve examined every part of this flower, and I cannot locate its beauty.”
In art, the sum of the parts doesn’t equal the whole. The “parts” (the rain or the love story back dropped in a cruel war) may have no value or meaning on their own, but when weaved together they take on a different life. This is true for any artist, whether they’re a writer or a painter. Would the awe of the Sistine Chapel be as strong if the painting was done on 3’ canvas?
Don’t be the scientist who destroys the book by ripping each page out of the book one by one. Enjoy the intrinsic beauty of the whole work.
Comment by Peter November 9, 2007 @ 7:10 pmYour comment about letting art be is most appropriate. It is to be experienced and not dissected to the point that you lose what it is trying to say or convey to you, the individual. One thing for sure, is that people can experience the same artistic beauty, yet come away with a completely different experience or interpretation of what they experienced.
Comment by Ronald L. Chaney November 10, 2007 @ 5:13 pmThis reader has caught the dark and depressing essence of this novel and has done a remarkable job describing it .
Comment by J. Anson November 11, 2007 @ 5:29 pmPL 3100: MKM - I agree with the vivid descriptions of this novel. This story is about a love story mixed in with the sad story of the war. It seems to have ups and downs, mixed with the general gloom of the war. Rain seems to set the mood of the stories most depressing and sad parts.
Comment by MKMiddleton November 11, 2007 @ 10:08 pmPL 3100: AJG - War, in its very nature, is dark and depressing. There are very little positive spins one can put upon death. The rain is a perfect description during the depressive parts of the novel. “I’ve examined every part of this flower, and I cannot locate its beauty.” I really enjoy this quote, because it makes sense in a lot of ways. I also agree with Peter in that many times with art the parts do not add up to the whole. I believe that this was an insightful essay into the work of Hemmingway!
Comment by AJGerhardt November 11, 2007 @ 10:27 pmPL: 3100
I like the way the religious (or non religious) thoughts and struggles of Frederic are portrayed. In my opinion, it shows that although he is a non-believer, he still turns to someone or something for hope. It is interesting because he is supposed to believe in nothing, yet when tragedy strikes, he wants to believe in something to make everything better. It makes one question, is the only reason why people believe in something is for comfort? Is it better to have something to believe in rather than nothing, so that there is someone or something upon which to blame a tragedy. I also liked the sense of hopelessness that is portrayed in this. Not that hopelessness should be a feeling that should be preferred, but it is a feeling that sometimes be hard to portray in a book. I believe that Hemingway does an excellent job describing it, especially with his usage of the weather to add to the overall despair of the work.
Comment by Chelsea Brauninger November 12, 2007 @ 1:37 ami like this story even though it is sad and depressing because it gives a vivid explanation of the dark side and i believe hemingway does a great job of doing so.
Comment by evette m orozco November 12, 2007 @ 9:46 pm